Thursday, November 8, 2012

Task 4 the competition among the children

It’s a worldwide issue. Some people believe that a feeling of competition in children should be supported. Other people think that children who are trained to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. In this case I will write the argument between the two kinds of thinking.
On the one hand, many people believe that competition among children has many benefits. However some families use that method with their kids. For example, who will do his work will get that thing. People think if you put group of people in competition you will get the best results. In addition, many people think if you made a spirit of competition among the group it would be a healthy environment.
On the other hand, although there are a lot of benefits in competition there is a group of people who think that we should educate the children to be more cooperative to each other. Also people think competition breeds hatred among children so some people prefer the cooperative method. For example, rewards and collective punishment will lead the group of children to be more cooperative.
In conclusion, I believe that both sides are right but to a reasonable limit. You can get their power by using both methods depend of the situation.

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